Very well done. Lord Gabe N approves:Nothing to read on this page (not on the next to)
A little story about the backgrounds:
When i finished the creatures and gona start on the backgrounds, i think. "I will never gona make good bakgrounds"
(I have only made 2 backrounds before. One pencil drawing on pointy mountains and one in photoshop on 2 planets.)
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So i took an hour and watched some tutorials and looking through some different brushes.
And in the end, I think the backrounds been a little to good.
Tell me if you want me to post the pages in thumbnails or in full images.
So here is the first page of this comic.
The little brave. p1.
Prey and hunter.
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I too think that the new background is a very nice substitute for the first :3 As for any story suggestions, perhaps the creature searches to find its herd/another member of its species, avoiding the dangers of the wilderness surrounding it. Keep up the good workFirst i wana say a few things.
1. that i change the background and found out that this (in my opinion) looks bether. But its your choise if i shall have this new style or the other one.
2. What do you think what would happen in the upcoming pages? (i have already a storyline im going to use, but there is "gaps" between the events of the storyline) So if you have anny idea of a short/tiny event or an idea for a creature. I would be happy to read about them.
This would help me to make a story who everyone would like and (maybe) feel to be participating in.
The little brave. p3
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Your suggestion are not far away from the main subject in this story. About that one creature is searching for its own kind while facing the big unknown world. These 2 first creatures is only bakground characters, but when i read your suggestion about them i got an idea how to use them more in the story. (similar to your idea)I too think that the new background is a very nice substitute for the first :3 As for any story suggestions, perhaps the creature searches to find its herd/another member of its species, avoiding the dangers of the wilderness surrounding it. Keep up the good work
You are not far away from the base story of this comicThe lil' white n orange fluffy creature is so cuuute The colors remind me off Cookies and Eggs, and i instantly thought i would call him Coo'ggi (rough spelling: Kjugi)
Will the little fluff find out hes the last of his kind or will he find more of his own kind? It would make a good story if he lives with the know that other reptiles seen the kind of him but it was a long time since they did and the lil' fluff is actually the last of his kind. His life would end with him thinking that he wasn't the last one, and does it matter if he wasn't? Atleast the fluff died happily
Keep up the work man, its konst'igt